Would you read on? End of a chapter.?

It's interesting so far and I like that you don't hold back with it. It's strange to come into the middle of something because at first I imagined Andrew was shackled to the floor. I'm not sure what 'working mouths' means. The world turning upside down happens too quickly too. If they're being attacked by a sea monster, he could be slammed against the wall first and slide up, wondering what the hell's going on. It could use more details, little nooks and crannies like that will bring it to life more. Once the ship is righted, if he's in a room of prisoners who've experienced that too - they could also be reacting to it. All the vomit and excrement on the floor could have moved around or something too. Definitely some good action though and I'd want to read on. Nice job! Good luck with it.